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My mobile phone had gone this noon. I love it very much because it was given by my sister. I ask my brother to give me a ring immediately. Unfortunately it was taken by someone and turned off it.
My mobile phone had gone this noon. I love it very much because it was given by my sister. I ask my brother to give me a ring immediately. Unfortunately it was taken by someone and turned off it.
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My mobile phone disappeared this noon. I love it very much because it was given to me by my sister. I asked my brother to give me a ring immediately.
- My mobile phone disappeared this noon.
- I love it very much because it was given to me by my sister.
- I asked my brother to give me a ring immediately.
- Unfortunately it was taken by someone who turned it off .
- You hoped that you would hear it ringing in the culprit's pocket?
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My mobile phone disappeared this noon. I love it very much because it was given to me by my sister. I asked my brother to give me a ring immediately. Unfortunately it was taken by someone who turned it off.
You hoped that you would hear it ringing in the culprit's pocket? An astute idea, if the perpetrator has returned to the scene of the crime.
You hoped that you would hear it ringing in the culprit's pocket? An astute idea, if the perpetrator has returned to the scene of the crime.
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