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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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very little aid had come into

After a long and dangerous journey into the remote villages that were hit by the deadly Myanmar cyclone, A and her team reached the devastated sites. It was obvious that very little aid had come into the villages.

Are there any mistakes?
Thanks.
  

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New2grammar After a long and dangerous journey into the remote villages that were hit by the deadly Myanmar cyclone, A and her team reached the devastated sites. It was obvious that very little aid had come into the villages. Are there any mistakes?

— Optilang

  • New2grammar After a long and dangerous journey into the remote villages that were hit by the deadly Myanmar cyclone, A and her team reached the devastated sites.
  • It was obvious that very little aid had come into the villages.
  • Are there any mistakes?
  • Thanks.
  • My preference would be to change into the remote villages to to the remote villages in the first sentence.
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New2grammarAfter a long and dangerous journey into the remote villages that were hit by the deadly Myanmar cyclone, A and her team reached the devastated sites. It was obvious that very little aid had come into the villages.

Are there any mistakes?
Thanks.

My preference would be to change into the remote villages to to the remo
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Thanks, Optilang. What's the meaning of "had come into" in the second sentence? Delivered?
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New2grammarThanks, Optilang. What's the meaning of "had come into" in the second sentence? Delivered?

Reached. - you could use delivered as well.
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