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Mr. Tom Posted 17 years ago
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Very carelessly, he extended his hand...

Hi

Could you please tell me if the following expressions sound OK to you?


1) Very casually, he, slumped in his chair, extended his hand to shake mine.

2) Very casually, he, sprawled in his chair, extended his hand to shake mine.

Tom
  

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They're OK, but I'd put he very casually just before extended . [Slumped / Sprawled] in his chair, he very casually extended his hand to shake mine. CJ

— CalifJim

  • They're OK, but I'd put he very casually just before extended .
  • [Slumped / Sprawled] in his chair, he very casually extended his hand to shake mine.
  • CJ
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They're OK, but I'd put he very casually just before extended.

[Slumped / Sprawled] in his chair, he very casually extended his hand to shake mine.

CJ
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