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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar
Verse checking
Hello,
In the context of a poem about a ghost or vampire, I would like to know if the following verse sounds coherent :
"His visage preyed on my decline"
Thanks in advance for your consideration.
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It probably makes more sense in context, but it's fine as some kind of metaphoric allusion. Presumably you're working with iambic tetrameter, so that part is OK. CJ
- It probably makes more sense in context, but it's fine as some kind of metaphoric allusion.
- Presumably you're working with iambic tetrameter, so that part is OK.
- CJ
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It probably makes more sense in context, but it's fine as some kind of metaphoric allusion. Presumably you're working with iambic tetrameter, so that part is OK.
CJ
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