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" When I was 16, in our first class in the swimming pool, I took a dive, but I wasn't previously aware of how deep the swimming pool was. As a consequence, I hit my face on the bottom of the swiming pool, and my legs bent towards my back. I remember I used to feel pain in my back, and sometimes, I even had to incline forward to relieve the pain."
Note: By 'inclining forward', I mean moving my torso forwards.
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Here are some edits. Note that I have added a time period to the last sentence z'When I was 16, in our first class in the swimming pool, I dived in but I wasn't previously aware of how shallow the pool was. As a consequence, I hit my face on the bottom of the swimingpool , and my legs bent towards my back.
- Here are some edits.
- Note that I have added a time period to the last sentence z'When I was 16, in our first class in the swimming pool, I dived in but I wasn't previously aware of how shallow the pool was.
- As a consequence, I hit my face on the bottom of the swimingpool , and my legs bent towards my back.
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Here are some edits.
Note that I have added a time period to the last sentence
z'When I was 16, in our first class in the swimming pool, I dived in but I wasn't previously aware of how shallow the pool was. As a consequence, I hit my face on the bottom of the swimingpool , and my legs bent towards my back. For two years, I remember, I
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