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Christine Christie Posted 6 years ago
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Is this sentence correct:


"I once took a dive in a low-depth swimming pool, and I hit my face on the bottom."

  

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Christine Christie Is this sentence correct: "Take a dive" is possible there, but it is not needed. Diving and hitting the bottom are part of the same act and should not be in different independent clauses. "Low-depth" does not work.

  • Christine Christie Is this sentence correct: "Take a dive" is possible there, but it is not needed.
  • Diving and hitting the bottom are part of the same act and should not be in different independent clauses.
  • "Low-depth" does not work.
  • " By the way, "dove" is American for "dived".
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Christine ChristieIs this sentence correct:

"Take a dive" is possible there, but it is not needed. Diving and hitting the bottom are part of the same act and should not be in different independent clauses. "Low-depth" does not work.

"I once dove into a shallow pool and hit my face on the bottom." By the way, "dove" is American for "dived".

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