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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

verb: execute

Please could you read this sentence and tell me if the verb execute really works well here or not as I am not sure it does:

I AM KEEN TO BEGIN A DIALOGIE, SO THAT IF YOU DO FEEL THE NEED FOR OUR SERVICES, WE CAN EXECUTE SMOOTHLY AND EFFICIENTLY.
  

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I AM KEEN TO BEGIN A DIALOGIE, SO THAT IF YOU DO FEEL THE NEED FOR OUR SERVICES, WE CAN EXECUTE SMOOTHLY AND EFFICIENTLY. 1. Next time, please don't use all upper-case, because it makes it a little harder to read.

  • I AM KEEN TO BEGIN A DIALOGIE, SO THAT IF YOU DO FEEL THE NEED FOR OUR SERVICES, WE CAN EXECUTE SMOOTHLY AND EFFICIENTLY.
  • 1.
  • Next time, please don't use all upper-case, because it makes it a little harder to read.
  • 2.
  • Check your spelling.
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I AM KEEN TO BEGIN A DIALOGIE, SO THAT IF YOU DO FEEL THE NEED FOR OUR SERVICES, WE CAN EXECUTE SMOOTHLY AND EFFICIENTLY.

1. Next time, please don't use all upper-case, because it makes it a little harder to read.

2. Check your spelling.

3. "Keen to" sounds dated. "I am eager to" is one alternative.

4. I don't like execute here either. But I don't like the conne
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I appreciate your reply and apologise for the spelling error as I was in a huge rush when I posted this. However, this letter that I am writing is for a private bank and I am not sure your sentence would fit appropriately.

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