I have never heard "befall" used intransitively like this. The subject is the undesired consequence... So that such fate would not befall them, ...
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AlpheccaStarsYou know that this verb is archaic, and used in old texts, or modern texts that are set long ago in history.That's exactly the case I have.But was my sentence correct grammatically?
AlpheccaStarsI don't think that you have used the verb "befall" correctly.Can you tell me whats exactly wrong with it? [except what you've already said]
JFCan you tell me whats exactly wrong with it? [except what you've already said]You have used it in passive voice. This verb is not to be used in the passive voice.
JFSo they would not be befallen with such fate. - Is it correct?No. As has been pointed out above, you've got the direction wrong.