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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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various different
Does this contain redundancy?
"This complex area of engineering can be deconstructed into various different areas: aeronautical engineers who deal with aircraft which fly within our ..."
"This complex area of engineering can be deconstructed into various different areas: aeronautical engineers who deal with aircraft which fly within our ..."
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"various different" is OK but the "area ... areas" repetition is noticeable and not ideal. I would suggest finding another word to replace one of those instances, but "aeronautical engineers" are not an "area" nor any word with similar meaning, so it won't be quite right.
- "various different" is OK but the "area ...
- areas" repetition is noticeable and not ideal.
- I would suggest finding another word to replace one of those instances, but "aeronautical engineers" are not an "area" nor any word with similar meaning, so it won't be quite right.
- Can you somehow change the last part to "aeronautical engineer ing ...
- "?
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"various different" is OK but the "area ... areas" repetition is noticeable and not ideal. I would suggest finding another word to replace one of those instances, but "aeronautical engineers" are not an "area" nor any word with similar meaning, so it won't be quite right. Can you somehow change the last part to "aeronautical engineering... "? That could be an "area", or "field", or "discipl
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