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Angliholic Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Varied beliefs

Do the outer differences in people's language indicate different modes of inner thinking? Or are they simply explicit behaviors, varied beliefs, or the distinct expressions of the same human minds?

HI,

Does the bolded part in the above sound good to you? If not, how should I rewrite it? Thanks.
  

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The bold seems to be speaking of language differences that do indicate inner thinking. As such, it should be deleted and begun again.

— Mister Micawber

  • The bold seems to be speaking of language differences that do indicate inner thinking.
  • As such, it should be deleted and begun again.
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The bold seems to be speaking of language differences that do indicate inner thinking. As such, it should be deleted and begun again.
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Thanks, Mister.

I don't quite follow you.

Do you mean I should rewrite it?

How?

Thanks again in advance.
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I don't know what you'll write, but you'll have to start again. As it is, the meanings of language are reversed from what I presume you intended.
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