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utopia

At the beginning of the 16th century, Thimas used a novel, Utopia, to open people's imagination to the concept of a virtual city, and "utopia" since then has been a powerful drive for civilized socities to improve, reflects man's tireless pursuit of his ideas and desires.

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Hi, At the beginning of the 16th century, Thimas used a novel, Utopia, to open people's imagination to the concept of a virtual city, and "utopia" since then has been a powerful drive for civilized socities to improve, reflects man's tireless pursuit of his ideas and desires. The author was Thomas More, not 'Thimas'. 'Utopia' was the name of his fictitious country, not of a city.

  • Hi, At the beginning of the 16th century, Thimas used a novel, Utopia, to open people's imagination to the concept of a virtual city, and "utopia" since then has been a powerful drive for civilized socities to improve, reflects man's tireless pursuit of his ideas and desires.
  • The author was Thomas More, not 'Thimas'.
  • 'Utopia' was the name of his fictitious country, not of a city.
  • I would call it an ideal country or society, not a virtual one.
  • I'd also make a few changes to the latter part of the sentence.
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At the beginning of the 16th century, Thimas used a novel, Utopia, to open people's imagination to the concept of a virtual city, and "utopia" since then has been a powerful drive for civilized socities to improve, reflects man's tireless pursuit of his ideas and desires.

The author was Thomas More, not 'Thimas'. 'Utopia' was the name of his fictiti

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