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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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utility charges
For a notice placed at a vacation rental, could you please check if the following sounds formal and natural?
<Revision o f Utilities >
Please be advised that our utility charges will be revised on April 1.
We have not changed the rates for the past ten years since March 2004. However, along with several times of increases in cost of public utilities in the past, we have decided to revise a part of the price structure. Currently, different rates apply depending the length of contracts (Weekly or Monthly). The same rate will apply to stays on both Weekly and Monthly contracts.
<Revision o f Utilities >
Please be advised that our utility charges will be revised on April 1.
We have not changed the rates for the past ten years since March 2004. However, along with several times of increases in cost of public utilities in the past, we have decided to revise a part of the price structure. Currently, different rates apply depending the length of contracts (Weekly or Monthly). The same rate will apply to stays on both Weekly and Monthly contracts.
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Revision of Utility Charges Please be advised that our utility charges will be revised effective April 1, 2014. Our rates have not changed since March 2004. However, the cost of public utilities has increased significantly over the past ten years, so we are at last forced to revise our price structure.
- Revision of Utility Charges Please be advised that our utility charges will be revised effective April 1, 2014.
- Our rates have not changed since March 2004.
- However, the cost of public utilities has increased significantly over the past ten years, so we are at last forced to revise our price structure.
- Currently, rates differ with length of contract (weekly or monthly), but from April 1st, the same rate will apply to both contracts.
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Revision of Utility Charges
Please be advised that our utility charges will be revised effective April 1, 2014.
Our rates have not changed since March 2004. However, the cost of public utilities has increased significantly over the past ten years, so we are at last forced to revise our price structure. Currently, rates differ with length of contract (weekly or mo
Please be advised that our utility charges will be revised effective April 1, 2014.
Our rates have not changed since March 2004. However, the cost of public utilities has increased significantly over the past ten years, so we are at last forced to revise our price structure. Currently, rates differ with length of contract (weekly or mo
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