It seems grammatical to me.
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ChrismlanganWould the following senentce be deemed acceptable: Mike looks in the pouch, then slowly shows it to Jack.There are many grammarians who believe that a pause in the flow merits a comma. My best instruction is that no comma is needed unless the subject changes or repeated (perhaps even with a conjunction)