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Samsoner2 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Using the word "has" in a sentence twice
Sorry for the complicated sentence. :\
I am trying to re-write this without having to use the word "has" twice.
Customer support has been a rewarding experience that has given me the opportunity to apply my critical thinking skills and passion for technology to help people.
Then I shortened it to this:
"Working in customer support has given me the opportunity to help people by applying my critical thinking skills and passion for technology. It has been a rewarding experience..."
I am trying to re-write this without having to use the word "has" twice.
Customer support has been a rewarding experience that has given me the opportunity to apply my critical thinking skills and passion for technology to help people.
Then I shortened it to this:
"Working in customer support has given me the opportunity to help people by applying my critical thinking skills and passion for technology. It has been a rewarding experience..."
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For my money, either way works fine.
- For my money, either way works fine.
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samsoner2Then I shortened itIt seems to be longer. I suggest:
Working in customer support has allowed me to apply my critical thinking skills and passion for technology. Helping people has been a rewarding experience.
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