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Vibhanu Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Using passive tense correctly.
I have some issues with this sentence
"By sponsoring this event your organization will benefit by receiving exposure to a target group of individuals in various fields of study and disciplines."
I feel this sentence is incorrect.Is it more correct to write like this?
"By sponsoring this event your organization will be benefited by receiving exposure to a target group of individuals in various fields of study and disciplines."
or
"Sponsoring this event will benefit your organization by receiving exposure to a target group of individuals in various fields of study and disciplines."
Cheers.
"By sponsoring this event your organization will benefit by receiving exposure to a target group of individuals in various fields of study and disciplines."
I feel this sentence is incorrect.Is it more correct to write like this?
"By sponsoring this event your organization will be benefited by receiving exposure to a target group of individuals in various fields of study and disciplines."
or
"Sponsoring this event will benefit your organization by receiving exposure to a target group of individuals in various fields of study and disciplines."
Cheers.
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"I feel this sentence is incorrect. No, it's fine. " No.
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- No, it's fine.
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Vibhanu"By sponsoring this event your organization will benefit by receiving exposure to a target group of individuals in various fields of study and disciplines."I feel this sentence is incorrect.No, it's fine.
VibhanuIs it more correct to write like this?"By sponsoring this event your organization will be benefited by receiving expos
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