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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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User do not need to add the....correct the sentence
Which one is grammatical correct and looking more sensible:
User do not need to add the EQPT to the map prior to provisioning a digital link. It automatically gets added to the submap where the managed NE is connected to the EQPT with an IE DL. In case other map window is opened, refresh the screen to see the changes.
When the user provisions a first digital link between a network element and an equipment and becomes 'In-Effect', the equipment automatically gets added to the sub-map where the managed NE is connected to the EQPT with an IE DL.User do not need to explicitly add the EQPT to the map prior to provisioning a digital link. In case other map is opened, refresh the screen to see the changes.
User do not need to add the EQPT to the map prior to provisioning a digital link. It automatically gets added to the submap where the managed NE is connected to the EQPT with an IE DL. In case other map window is opened, refresh the screen to see the changes.
When the user provisions a first digital link between a network element and an equipment and becomes 'In-Effect', the equipment automatically gets added to the sub-map where the managed NE is connected to the EQPT with an IE DL.User do not need to explicitly add the EQPT to the map prior to provisioning a digital link. In case other map is opened, refresh the screen to see the changes.
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the first is a bit clearer but still not 100%
Users or The user, not just 'user.
provisioning - I'm not sure this is the word you want here. It doesn't make much sense to me.
In case other map window is opened - this needs re-phrasing. Will it always open another map window? If yes, say 'when another map window is opened'. If no, say 'In cases when another map window is
Users or The user, not just 'user.
provisioning - I'm not sure this is the word you want here. It doesn't make much sense to me.
In case other map window is opened - this needs re-phrasing. Will it always open another map window? If yes, say 'when another map window is opened'. If no, say 'In cases when another map window is
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The user do not need to add a EQPT to the map prior to provisioning a digital link.
Is this correct? (do not need to)
Is this correct? (do not need to)
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Is this mean "Users do not need to add..." line is correct? I am still not clear.
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Anonymous, some of us sleep at night. So when you post at what is midnight for me and then are impatient that you do not have a response before I am even awake, it takes away some of my urge to help. We do this for "fun," remember, so don't be upset that you don't have a response within hours.
Yes, Users do is correct. A user does is correct. Users does is not
Yes, Users do is correct. A user does is correct. Users does is not
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