Use Ruszkiewicz's thirteen suggestions from Chapter 18 to edit your prose. Pay close attention to the subject of each sentence, your specificity and clarity of nouns, and your pronouns

Paragraph 1.

In the beginning, it asks, The limits of my language mean the limits of my world. What I think he meant was the languages you know and the more you learn can make a world seem a lot bigger. You have a lot more opportunities because you know so many languages and I think it's best to always learn more. Broken English is my language community and I wouldn't have it any other way because it's something I've known since birth and to me I think it's a very awesome community to be a part of.

Paragraph 2.

After these 7 weeks, I've learned to become a better writer. With the help of the peer reviews it made me more comfortable to write something and post it for feedback. Mini lectures helped as well because it helped me understand more of what I need to do so that I can become a better writer and have a better story. Writers journal helped me practice what I needed to do so that I have a better final story for my audience. So pretty much every I was taught in this class has made me a better writer. I struggled so much in the beginning and it showed. Now, I can take what I learn and write a lot more for an audience that loves a personal experience. Writing wasn't my strong subject well I was in school and coming into this class at the beginning I knew I was going to have problems, but now I feel like I have become a better writer and will continue to learn more and grow as one.