Use of "the"

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Hi,I was writing an email to my peers at work and noticed i had too many "the"s in one of the sentences....are eager to know the progress of the preparation of the &lt;name of the project we are working on&gt;...I replaced one of the "the"s with "our" to make it sound better. (to "our" preparation)What do you guys think? Any advice?

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

Hi Chipper, and welcome to English Forums.

Your replacement was fine, but I bet no one would have noticed the "the"s in the original. Unlike exclamation marks! Which tend to draw the reader's notice!!

You could have recast the sentence too: ...are eager for a report on the progress we're making as we prepare for the X project. -- That's just one example of how you could re-do.

I usually find if I rewrite the sentence more than twice, I'm probably either over thinking it, or trying to put too much into one sentence. For example, do you really need to say "the progress of the preparation"? Could you simply say "how we're progressing on the X project"?

Chipper · Answer

Thank you, Grammar Geek!

The points you made are very helpful. Guess it is something I need to work more on.

BarbaraPA · Answer

E-mail is both a blessing and a curse.
On the one hand, they usually aren't kept forever - their purpose is to give a quick bit of information or ask a quick question, and move on. So you don't usually have to write at the same level as your senior thesis.
On the other hand, because they're so spontaneous, people sometimes don't put enough tought into it and in their haste end up lacking clarity or professionalism.
I'd say if you even think about things like this, you're better than 85% of the people sending them every day!

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