Hello, I am unsure if this is an acceptable use of a semicolon in this thesis statement. A comma in place of it does not seem to read correctly, as it lumps the three problems into a list with the saltwater inundation.
As sea levels continue to rise, villages in rural Bangladesh watch as salt water inundates their communities; destroying their crops, drinking sources, and ways of life. It is necessary to implement innovative solutions such as Pond Sand Filters, as well as employ diplomacy with neighboring nations to stop this glaring issue.
Any help would be appreciated. Thanks!
As sea levels continue to rise, villages in rural Bangladesh watch as salt water inundates their communities – destroying their crops, drinking sources, and ways of life. It is necessary to deploy implement innovative solutions such as Po nd S and Fi lters, (not proper nouns) as well as taking advantage of diplomatic relationships employ diplomacy with neighboring nations to stop this glaring issue . (wrong word)
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As sea levels continue to rise, villages in rural Bangladesh watch as salt water inundates their communities– destroying their crops, drinking sources, and ways of life. It is necessary to deploy implement innovative solutions such as Pond S