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Cayenne Posted 10 years ago
Business & Finance
Use of numbers in a sentence with respectively
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During 2015 and 2014, there were four and four employees, respectively, whose account balances exceeded a month’s salary.
During 2015 and 2014, there were four and four employees, respectively, whose account balances exceeded a month’s salary.
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Hello, cayenne—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
During 2014 and 2015, there were four employees each year whose account balances exceeded o
cayenne Is this sentence correct?You should not use 'respectively' there. There is a simpler solution. Also, years and numbers should be in ascending order:
During 2014 and 2015, there were four employees each year whose account balances exceeded o
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