Hi
Is the underlined part natural English? Any other suggestions?
James was too much to handle as a father. He monitored every single move of his children microscopically.
Thanks,
Tom
It doesn't work for me. Just omit the adverb. g.
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It doesn't work for me. Just omit the adverb. But if you must use something, I would choose meticulously or fastidiously, or a simile e.g. "like a nervous mother hen."
Thanks, AStar.
Is it totally natural now?
James was too much to handle as a father. He monitored every single move of his children fastidiously.
Tom