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Pavlides Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Use of commas

How should I separate the list below? With commas? And can I capitalize Summer Land, Creeds and Cultures etc?

Thanks.

Sphere One: the Hell Realm, rotates with the Earth, geo-stationary
Altitude: 240 miles, 4000ft thick

Sphere Two: Summer Land, Creeds and Cultures, rotates with the Earth, geo-stationary
Altitude: 800 miles

Sphere Three: Paradise, rotates with the Earth, geo-stationary
Altitude: 2400 miles
  

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Joe Kerr How should I separate the list below? With commas? It is not narrative text, so you may do as you like.

— Mister Micawber

  • Joe Kerr How should I separate the list below?
  • With commas?
  • It is not narrative text, so you may do as you like.
  • Commas and semicolons are good choices.
  • Joe Kerr And can I capitalize Summer Land, Creeds and Cultures etc?
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Joe KerrHow should I separate the list below? With commas?
It is not narrative text, so you may do as you like. Commas and semicolons are good choices.
Joe KerrAnd can I capitalize Summer Land, Creeds and Cultures etc?
That again is up to you; they are obviously coined terms in some sort of New Age cosmology.
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