"primarily in the hitman scene and the fight between Castigliani's thug and Lorraine and the pool man"
For the bolded words, where do I place the comma, assuming I'm trying to convey that it was a 1v2 fight, with the thug against Lorraine and the pool man? or do i say
"Castigliani's thug, Lorraine, and the pool man"?
which isn't clear that it's two people against one person.
or
"Castiligiani's thug, and Lorraine and the pool man"?
Top answer
No comma is correct punctuation, so you must recast: primarily in the hitman scene and Castigliani's thug's fight with Lorraine and the pool man
— Mister Micawber
No comma is correct punctuation, so you must recast: primarily in the hitman scene and Castigliani's thug's fight with Lorraine and the pool man
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