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Aday Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

use of comma, repeat of subject and using 'and'

1) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face, and they meet in front of the ship, few hundred meters away.
2) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face and meet in front of the ship, few hundred meters away.
which is correct? Note: Difference is in 1st, I have put ", and they"
  

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1) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face, and they meet in front of the ship, a few hundred meters away. 2) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face and meet in front of the ship, a few hundred meters away. which is correct?

  • 1) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face, and they meet in front of the ship, a few hundred meters away.
  • 2) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face and meet in front of the ship, a few hundred meters away.
  • which is correct?
  • Note: Difference is in 1st, I have put ", and they" Both are OK.
  • #2 is better.
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1) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face, and they meet in front of the ship, a few hundred meters away.
2) Two beams of light emerge diagonally from the left and right ends of the ship face and meet in front of the ship, a few hundred meters away.
which is cor

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