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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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use of comma and sentence structure
Let me know if the commas are placed correctly in the below sentence and also if the sentence structure is sound. Thanks!
Eventually, one mother tops the other, in the race to achieve happiness of their daughters as per their perception.
Eventually, one mother tops the other, in the race to achieve happiness of their daughters as per their perception.
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Eventually, one mother tops the ot her in the race to achieve in their eyes the happiness of their daughters .
- Eventually, one mother tops the ot her in the race to achieve in their eyes the happiness of their daughters .
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Eventually, one mother tops the other in the race to achieve in their eyes the happiness of their daughters.
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