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0On behalf of Carlos Soto, 01b00N02b00ational 01b00Hi02b00spanic 01b00C02b00orporate 01b00C02b00ouncil’s President, I thank you for informing us that you will not be able to participate in our upcoming conference. It is unfortunate that you will not be joining us; however we would like to extend an invitation to any other member of your team to participate. I look forward to speaking with you soon. 02br
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00On behalf of Carlos Soto, 01b00N02b00ational 01b00Hi02b00spanic 01b00C02b00orporate 01b00C02b00ouncil President, thank you for advising 05000that you will not be able to participate in our upcoming conference. It is unfortunate that you will not be joining us; however we would like to extend an invitation to any other member of your team to attend. I look forward to speaking with you soon.010id1