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Sailsofoblivion Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Use of "and"?
In this sentence, have I used the word 'and' too much?
Thanks in advance!
I leaned down and fixed his slipper, and was greeted by the sight of black toenails, and cracked skin that looked like cheese.
Thanks in advance!
I leaned down and fixed his slipper, and was greeted by the sight of black toenails, and cracked skin that looked like cheese.
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Better is this. I leaned down to fix his slipper, and was greeted by the sight of cracked skin that looked like cheese and black toenails.
- Better is this.
- I leaned down to fix his slipper, and was greeted by the sight of cracked skin that looked like cheese and black toenails.
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Better is this.
I leaned down to fix his slipper, and was greeted by the sight of cracked skin that looked like cheese and black toenails.
I leaned down to fix his slipper, and was greeted by the sight of cracked skin that looked like cheese and black toenails.
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CliveBetter is this.I leaned down to fix his slipper, and was greeted by the sight of cracked skin that looked like cheese and black toenails..Thank you
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