Even his deathbed and grave still found him with the vail on his face
The revised section:
Even his deathbed and grave found him with the veil on his face.
Should "still" be omitted?
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jhilly89 Even his deathbed and grave still found him with the vail on his face I've found your sentence interestingly puzzling without further context.
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jhilly89
Even his deathbed and grave still found him with the vail on his face
I've found your sentence interestingly puzzling without further context.