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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Use of adjectives when clarifying a noun
Hello:
I'm writing a letter and I'm unlcear about how to construct this sentence:
"Our team has 10 years of design experience across several engineering disciplines, including Electrical, Mechanical and Software fields".
I can't get this to sound right in my head. I'm struggling with the word "fields" at the end. Should I remove it altogether or repeat the word "disciplines" instead?
Thank you for your suggestions,
G.
I'm writing a letter and I'm unlcear about how to construct this sentence:
"Our team has 10 years of design experience across several engineering disciplines, including Electrical, Mechanical and Software fields".
I can't get this to sound right in my head. I'm struggling with the word "fields" at the end. Should I remove it altogether or repeat the word "disciplines" instead?
Thank you for your suggestions,
G.
Top answer
The sentence is good and it sounds right, too.
- The sentence is good and it sounds right, too.
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AnonymousI'm writing a letter and I'm unlcear about how to construct this sentence:
"Our team has 10 years of design experience across several engineering disciplines, including Electrical, Mechanical and Software fields".
I can't get this to sound right in my head. I'm struggling with the word "fields" at the end. Should I remove it altogether or repeat the
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