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Demitri Chuykoff Posted 13 years ago
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This won't fetch the sad sheen from your eye
Your heed is hard to occupy
Is it OK to use expression "fetch the sad sheen" (it's kind of metaphor) in first line if I mean to say "cause eyes to fill with tears"? Can I use a word "heed" in such way in the second line?
Your heed is hard to occupy
Is it OK to use expression "fetch the sad sheen" (it's kind of metaphor) in first line if I mean to say "cause eyes to fill with tears"? Can I use a word "heed" in such way in the second line?
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This won't fetch the sad sheen from your eye OK, except I'd say 'to' instead of 'from' . Your heed is hard to occupy I don't know what this means. Do you?
- This won't fetch the sad sheen from your eye OK, except I'd say 'to' instead of 'from' .
- Your heed is hard to occupy I don't know what this means.
- Do you?
- Is it OK to use expression "fetch the sad sheen" (it's kind of metaphor) in first line if I mean to say "cause eyes to fill with tears"?
- Can I use a word "heed" in such way in the second line?
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This won't fetch the sad sheen from your eye OK, except I'd say 'to' instead of 'from'.
Your heed is hard to occupy I don't know what this means. Do you?
Is it OK to use expression "fetch the sad sheen" (it's kind of metaphor) in first line if I mean to say "cause eyes to fill with tears"? Can I use a word "h
Your heed is hard to occupy I don't know what this means. Do you?
Is it OK to use expression "fetch the sad sheen" (it's kind of metaphor) in first line if I mean to say "cause eyes to fill with tears"? Can I use a word "h
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Demitri ChuykoffYour heed is hard to occupy'Head' makes more sense.
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