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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Business & Finance

Usage of specific words so as to make a meaningful sentence

Hi,

I am Manoj from India. I am a self employed person and am in to consulting. I focus on the Educatonal Institutions as a primary market.

Along with my consultancy name, I am planning to have a Tagline, which indicates our business's motto. As I said earlier, we plan to cater to the needs of educational institutions and we are talking about the Hitech Equipments (which are mostly used in the Research Labs). Hence we have come out with a tagline which reads........ ' Empowering the Edifying Endeavors'. Which shall convey the meaning of 'we (as a company) empower various endeavor of our clients, which are edifying in nature'.

I hereby request my english expert friends to guide me. I want to know if the usage of these 3 words makes a meaningful sentence.

The variants are as below.........

  • Empowering the Edifying Endeavors

  • Empowering Edifying Endeavors

  • Edifying Endeavors Empowered
Please let us know which one of the above is a correct usage. If all the 3 are not correct, please suggest the correct usage of these 3 words.

Many Thanks in advance.

Manoj

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