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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Usage of "on"?

Is underlined parts okay in this sentence?

The needs of a skin depend not only on aging processes in the body, but also on change of seasons.

An one more thing, is "change of seasons" okay? It shoud mean that the skin is influenced by the fact that seasons constantly change

Thanks!!
  

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on is fine. More natural is eg The needs of your skin depend not only on the aging processes in the body, but also on the change of seasons .

  • on is fine.
  • More natural is eg The needs of your skin depend not only on the aging processes in the body, but also on the change of seasons .
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on is fine.

More natural is
eg The needs of your skin depend not only on the aging processes in the body, but also on the change of seasons.

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