Usage of "in an increasing rate"
I wore the following sentence as a part of an essay. However, I'm not precisely sure about the usage of "in an increasing rate" in the sentence. I would be really grateful if someone could let me know whether the following sentence is acceptable and grammatically correct.
There might be a number of causes of these crimes to occur in an increasing rate.
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dileepa There might be a number of causes of these crimes to occur in an increasing rate. Yuck! I had to read it several times to figure out what you were trying to say.
- dileepa There might be a number of causes of these crimes to occur in an increasing rate.
- Yuck!
- I had to read it several times to figure out what you were trying to say.
- Verbatim, it does not make sense.
- "might be" - ?
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dileepaThere might be a number of causes of these crimes to occur in an increasing rate.
Yuck!
I had to read it several times to figure out what you were trying to say. Verbatim, it does not make sense.
"might be" - ? Aren't use sure that there are any reasons?
This is much better: - A reduction from 16 words to 10.
There are some
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