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The next car to test was the Dodge Challenger. The vehicle was excellent to drive, and it had great handling. However, the interior was dated, and it had cosmetic faults. But these could be rectified later, and weren't necessarily a divisive factor on the cars value as a whole. The vehicle was famously used in the film 'Vanishing Point' in 1971, as a result this model has nostalgic value to fans of the film, and 1970's culture.
Does the section underlined require a new paragraph as a rule? Or can you continue. How do you define a new topic sentence versus a continuation of the same idea, but in a different area (testing a vehicle to the vehicles background).
For instance, I'd have chosen a new paragraph for a new vehicle to discuss etc as opposed to discussing multiple different areas around the same car.
Does this require (who had the same name as his sister)? Optional ?
He'd met a girl called Sarah, the same name as his sister.
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You wouldn't want a one-sentence paragraph, so you should include the last sentence, but use a good transitional device to connect the sentence to the rest of the paragraph. You have many punctuation errors in the paragraph. I would use " who had the same name as his sister" in the second question .
- You wouldn't want a one-sentence paragraph, so you should include the last sentence, but use a good transitional device to connect the sentence to the rest of the paragraph.
- You have many punctuation errors in the paragraph.
- I would use " who had the same name as his sister" in the second question .
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You wouldn't want a one-sentence paragraph, so you should include the last sentence, but use a good transitional device to connect the sentence to the rest of the paragraph. You have many punctuation errors in the paragraph.
I would use "who had the same name as his sister" in the second question.
0The paragraph seems fine to me. The underlined section ties back to the car's value as a whole.
I saw the movie Vanishig Point. It's great, and has become a cult classic.
Clive
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