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Sarnga1157 Posted 14 years ago
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Hello,

I came across the below in an advertisement for a store that was moving to a new location.

"From April 2012 onwards with new look in new environment for upcoming generation"

I know it's grammatically wrong, but I'd like to know how best to express what they were trying to say in correct English, even if we'd have to use better words to express the same.

Thanks,
Prasanna
  

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It's not even a sentence, so assuming you'd like a complete sentence, they probably mean something like this: Starting in April 2012 we'll have a new look in a new environment with greater appeal for the new generation. CJ

— CalifJim

  • It's not even a sentence, so assuming you'd like a complete sentence, they probably mean something like this: Starting in April 2012 we'll have a new look in a new environment with greater appeal for the new generation.
  • CJ
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It's not even a sentence, so assuming you'd like a complete sentence, they probably mean something like this:

Starting in April 2012 we'll have a new look in a new environment with greater appeal for the new generation.

CJ
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Thanks, Jim. It actually wasn't a proper sentence, it was just a 2-liner above the title of a book store. So, it was

From April 2012 onwards with new look in new environment for upcoming generation, (there wasn't a comma here, but I believe this is needed?)

X.Y.Z. Books and Stationery,
Address---
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In this case, h
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