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Sklarka Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
urgently: could you help me?
hello, i am going to send my first motivation letter for exchange study. please, could you check it? thank you for your kindness. miroslava
To whom it may concern,
I am writing to express my great interest in study mobility at Faculty of Architecture in Graz University of Technology, which, I truly believe, will be the rich contribution for my life.
Foreign studies and exchange programs always help students to improve their knowledge and gain new experiences. It is a unique opportunity which incites to confront acquired knowledge and learn more from a new point of view. An exchange programme would introduce me new challenges how to be a more qualified architect.
Whole my study I am interested in Austrian architecture for the reason of its repute. For me it is an inspiration of worth architecture which is innovative in every way. A few years ago I was fascinated by presentation of Graz architecture and city by itself. The Airport (Riegler, Riewe), main railway station (Zechner&Zechner), Stadthalle (Klaus Kada), Kunsthalle (Peter Cook, Colin Fournier), Mur Island (Vito Acconci)... these create only a fragment of well-known buildings and architects from the city where the historic and modern is blended together in harmony.
The Faculty of Architecture in Graz offer a holistic way of working and thinking led by the university teachers which are come from all around the world. To be a part of it would mean for me a great chance to experience a new approach towards creating and designing.
During my study of architecture I realised how important is to touch and feel architecture, not only read about it. I hope, I reach my objectives with the exchange program CEEPUS. My objectives will be reached by myself supported by the exchange program CEEPUS.
Kind regards
thank you one more time;)
To whom it may concern,
I am writing to express my great interest in study mobility at Faculty of Architecture in Graz University of Technology, which, I truly believe, will be the rich contribution for my life.
Foreign studies and exchange programs always help students to improve their knowledge and gain new experiences. It is a unique opportunity which incites to confront acquired knowledge and learn more from a new point of view. An exchange programme would introduce me new challenges how to be a more qualified architect.
Whole my study I am interested in Austrian architecture for the reason of its repute. For me it is an inspiration of worth architecture which is innovative in every way. A few years ago I was fascinated by presentation of Graz architecture and city by itself. The Airport (Riegler, Riewe), main railway station (Zechner&Zechner), Stadthalle (Klaus Kada), Kunsthalle (Peter Cook, Colin Fournier), Mur Island (Vito Acconci)... these create only a fragment of well-known buildings and architects from the city where the historic and modern is blended together in harmony.
The Faculty of Architecture in Graz offer a holistic way of working and thinking led by the university teachers which are come from all around the world. To be a part of it would mean for me a great chance to experience a new approach towards creating and designing.
During my study of architecture I realised how important is to touch and feel architecture, not only read about it. I hope, I reach my objectives with the exchange program CEEPUS. My objectives will be reached by myself supported by the exchange program CEEPUS.
Kind regards
thank you one more time;)
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sklarka To whom it may concern, (This is very formal and impersonal. ) mobility at the Faculty of Architecture in Graz University of Technology, which, I truly believe, will rich ly contribut e to my future success in life. Foreign studies and exchange programs always help students to improve their knowledge and gain new experiences.
- sklarka To whom it may concern, (This is very formal and impersonal.
- ) mobility at the Faculty of Architecture in Graz University of Technology, which, I truly believe, will rich ly contribut e to my future success in life.
- Foreign studies and exchange programs always help students to improve their knowledge and gain new experiences.
- It is a unique opportunity which incites to confront questions acquired knowledge and motivates the student to learn more from new point s of view.
- An exchange programme would introduce me to new challenges that would make me how to be a better qualified architect.
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sklarkaTo whom it may concern, (This is very formal and impersonal. Perhaps it would be better to say "Dear Sir or Madam)
I am writing to express my great interest in studying the subject of (urban?) mobility at the Faculty of Architecture in Graz University of Technology, which, I truly believe, will richly contribute to my future suc
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