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0 What a fun event is approaching – our PY1G class BBQ outing! 02 br
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00 First of all, thank you very much for your support. We have altogether 12 families avaliable to join the event. Enclosed please see an updated word document for list of participants. We have made a booking under the name of " " for 44 person. Upon your arrival, please go directly to the reception area and staff there should be able to guide you to the assigned BBQ site. 02 br
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00 We would like to update you the following: 02 br
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00 (1) BBQ Lunch 02 br
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00 We are going to have a BBQ lunch at around 12:00 noon. Cost is on actual consumption basis. Please refer to our website for choices of food and drinks. 02 br
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00 (2) Activitives / Games 02 br
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00 There are various activities / games that kids could enjoy there. For example, cycling, fishing, shrimp fishing, booth games, etc. We will bring some games like football, badminton, kite for them. As we mentioned in the first email, this is a causal gathering and we prefer letting them to choose their own games for free play. Therefore, group games are not to be arranged. However, if you think otherwise, please feel free to make any suggestions. 02 br
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00 (3) Transport arrangement 02 br
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00 For those who are going to take feeder bus, please refer to our website for bus schedule. For those who are going to drive your own car, please note that parking is at no cost. For driving direction, please refer to our website. 02 br
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00 Weather forecast indicates that Saturday will be a sunny day but with interval showers. Don't forget to bring a rain coat / an umberalla for kid(s). Depends on the weather condition, we told by the club manager that we could switch to the covered BBQ site. Let's keep our fingers crossed! 0-
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00 First of all, thank you very much for your support. We have altogether 12 families avaliable to join the event. Enclosed please see an updated word document for list of participants. We have made a booking under the name of " " for 44 person. Upon your arrival, please go directly to the reception area and staff there should be able to guide you to the assigned BBQ site. 02 br
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00 We would like to update you the following: 02 br
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00 (1) BBQ Lunch 02 br
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00 We are going to have a BBQ lunch at around 12:00 noon. Cost is on actual consumption basis. Please refer to our website for choices of food and drinks. 02 br
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00 (2) Activitives / Games 02 br
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00 There are various activities / games that kids could enjoy there. For example, cycling, fishing, shrimp fishing, booth games, etc. We will bring some games like football, badminton, kite for them. As we mentioned in the first email, this is a causal gathering and we prefer letting them to choose their own games for free play. Therefore, group games are not to be arranged. However, if you think otherwise, please feel free to make any suggestions. 02 br
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00 (3) Transport arrangement 02 br
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00 For those who are going to take feeder bus, please refer to our website for bus schedule. For those who are going to drive your own car, please note that parking is at no cost. For driving direction, please refer to our website. 02 br
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00 Weather forecast indicates that Saturday will be a sunny day but with interval showers. Don't forget to bring a rain coat / an umberalla for kid(s). Depends on the weather condition, we told by the club manager that we could switch to the covered BBQ site. Let's keep our fingers crossed! 0-
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0 What a fun event is approaching – our PY1G class BBQ outing! 02 br 02 br 00 First of all, thank you very much for your support. Altogether, we have 12 families joining the event.
- 0 What a fun event is approaching – our PY1G class BBQ outing!
- 02 br 02 br 00 First of all, thank you very much for your support.
- Altogether, we have 12 families joining the event.
- Enclosed please see an updated word document list of participants.
- We have made a booking under the name of " " for 44 persons.
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0 What a fun event is approaching – our PY1G class BBQ outing! 02 br
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00 First of all, thank you very much for your support. Altogether, we have 12 families joining the event. Enclosed please see an updated word document list of participants. We have made a booking under the name of " " for 44 persons. Upon your arrival, please go directly to the reception area, and staff
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00 First of all, thank you very much for your support. Altogether, we have 12 families joining the event. Enclosed please see an updated word document list of participants. We have made a booking under the name of " " for 44 persons. Upon your arrival, please go directly to the reception area, and staff
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