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01b01u00Topic:02u02b00 01i00Write an essay about how the internet affects the way people communicate with each other02i02br
00Internet, in this high-tech era, has become more popular with people of all ages. It provides the whole community with a huge amount of communication as well as a great means of entertainment and global connection. This advanced technology has also contributed to the considerable change in communication among people, particularly youngsters. The fact that people prefer the use of writing via chat-windows, blogs or e-mails instead of face-to-face talking limits the use of body language. Moreover, Internet addicts are likely to convey their thoughts and react to others’ in the same way of communication in the virtual world.00Internet addiction causes the communication form of writing to be more popular. In common sense, communication is the way of transforming information and emotion with the use of speaking or writing. When the Internet was not popularized, the communication form of speaking was preferable since it was considered much faster than the process of writing and sending a letter. However, along with the development of information technology, people have been accustomed to chat-windows, blogs or e-mails, and (have) used them as normal tools of modern communication. This newly-formed habit of exchanging information or messages leads communicators to ignore the use of physical means such as facial expression, eye contact and haptics. Meanwhile, these factors are proved to be necessary parts of effective communication in real life because they help communicators to well-control the situation and judiciously-react to their partners’ thoughts and feelings. Actually, writing habit limits body language in daily communication.00Young people who live in the virtual world of network nearly all the time have involved in anonymous communication via pseudonymous account at least once, thus they know the feeling of suspicion in the process of the contact. In such a case, almost everything they tell each other is for the purpose of fun and relaxation. Hardly is there any time when they tell their true feelings. In some other cases, they confine in a person in the cyber-world about their problems just because that person does not know much about them. They feel free to talk without judging how that person is and without worrying how they will be judged. This habit results in their lack of communication skills and ability to realize a trustworthy person in real life. Therefore, they hardly have reasonable reaction in different situations; they just act as if they were in their virtual community. 00In conclusion, above is the newly-formed way of communication among people as a result of Internet abuse. To some extent, this cannot be said to be entirely negative; but it is certain to adversely affect communicators, especially young ones in daily life. In fact, the development of this advanced technology raises a question of how young generations can remain communicating with each other in a natural way, while they do not stop abusing the Internet.02br
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