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Cfvg Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

urgent! please check grammer , Thanks

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I. General of Ha province

1. Location and topography

2. Population

3. Socio-economic achievements of Ha province 2001-2005

* Economic development achievements

* Industry and small scale industry

* Industrial zone

* Agriculture zone

*Transport

*Posts and telecommunications

*Travel

*Education and Trainning

*Health

*Cultural , Social and sports

II. Environment reality



1. Warter Enviroment reality

2. Air Enviroment reality

3. Solid waste enviroment reality
  

Top answer

There are some spelling mistakes: Water - not warter, Training - not trainning. Also, in the first section you wrote "General of Ha Nam Province" - General describes something. General Characteristics of Ha Nam Province.

— Hyena

  • There are some spelling mistakes: Water - not warter, Training - not trainning.
  • Also, in the first section you wrote "General of Ha Nam Province" - General describes something.
  • General Characteristics of Ha Nam Province.
  • Features of Ha Nam Province.
  • The words "Environment reality" is strange.
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There are some spelling mistakes: Water - not warter, Training - not trainning.

Also, in the first section you wrote "General of Ha Nam Province" - General describes something. General Characteristics of Ha Nam Province. Features of Ha Nam Province.

The words "Environment reality" is strange. Don't use the word reality, that is strange. Perhaps, "State of the Environment", "
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Many thank you Hyena!

CFVG
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