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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Separating girls from boys was also practiced in the late 60’s and was considered as an “appropriate educative aspect of learning environments” as pollard mentioned.



why does the above sentence have faulty parallelism and can i fix it ?
  

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Hi, Separating girls from boys was also practiced in the late 60’s , and was considered as an “appropriate educative aspect of learning environments” , as P ollard mentioned. why does the above sentence have faulty parallelism and can i fix it ? It seems OK to me.

  • Hi, Separating girls from boys was also practiced in the late 60’s , and was considered as an “appropriate educative aspect of learning environments” , as P ollard mentioned.
  • why does the above sentence have faulty parallelism and can i fix it ?
  • It seems OK to me.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Separating girls from boys was also practiced in the late 60’s, and was considered as an “appropriate educative aspect of learning environments”, as Pollard mentioned.

why does the above sentence have faulty parallelism and can i fix it ?
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I do not see any sort of paralIelism in your sentence. Once you have implemented Clive's corrections, your sentence seems fine to me too. If you are having problems, show your teacher this thread.

When two or more parts of a sentence are parallel in meaning (such as items in a http://grammar.about.c

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