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Naked chef Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Urgent please!

Dear all,

I would like to email my friends about my talk show. Could you please check my english? My letter is as below:

"Dear all,

I would like to inform you that there will be a talk on (date*****). (presenter's name) will give a talk to audience about some kind of obstacles they may face while they are studying the career education and what sort of abilities they need to overcome these difficulties. "

thanks in advance!

Naked Chef!
  

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Dear all, I would like to inform you that there will be a talk on (date**). (presenter's name) will give a talk on the obstacles students may face while they are studying for a career in education and what sort of abilities they will need to overcome these difficulties.

  • Dear all, I would like to inform you that there will be a talk on (date**).
  • (presenter's name) will give a talk on the obstacles students may face while they are studying for a career in education and what sort of abilities they will need to overcome these difficulties.
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Dear all,

I would like to inform you that there will be a talk on (date**). (presenter's name) will give a talk on the obstacles students may face while they are studying for a career in education and what sort of abilities they will need to overcome these difficulties.
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Dear Mister Micawber,

Thanks you very much for your kind help!

Naked Chef!

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