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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Urgent Help - This will determine my future!

Hi there guys,

I need some help with a question I have been given. It's connected with an application form to obtain an plumbing apprenticeship.

The theory Is that I could easily anwser this question but It must be answered tremendously well. This Is because they are only taking on 16 to 17 year olds. I am actually 18 but an employee mentioned that I would be considered If my application for exceled the rest of the candidates.

At the moment I have completed the application form except the main question which will either make me or break me. The question is...

'Please give details of skills, knowledge and experience relevant to the job, gained either in previouse jobs or from activities outside emploment.'<<<<< To do with plumbing.

If someone could help me write about this I have many pointers which can help you like my skills in:

computers, teamwork, electronics, the enthusiasm for the job, driving ability, sport player, and more...

This must be exellent for me to be considered as I'm over the wanted age but their is hope!

If you can help please email me at Email Removed">Email Removed - I can offer a small some of money for your time, and this must be completed by 16th of this month which is a few days away.

(I have passed my JTL tests to be a plumber so I'm just looking for an employer. This Is what I really want In life. Help would be great.)
  

Top answer

This is a question no one can answer but yourself; however, you should include only those experiences which might have some application to plumbing. Plumbers don't need perfect English composition skills. If you will write up a draft paragraph, we will check it for egregious errors.

  • This is a question no one can answer but yourself; however, you should include only those experiences which might have some application to plumbing.
  • Plumbers don't need perfect English composition skills.
  • If you will write up a draft paragraph, we will check it for egregious errors.
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This is a question no one can answer but yourself; however, you should include only those experiences which might have some application to plumbing. Plumbers don't need perfect English composition skills. If you will write up a draft paragraph, we will check it for egregious errors.
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My knowlege, skills and experience as a plumber are as follows:

Install, connect and test plumbing fixtures such as urinals, water closets, wash basins, sinks and drinking fountains, compressed air fixtures, and such gas fired equipment as heat furnaces, boilers and processing tanks.

Monitor and troubleshoot major plumbing breakdowns by diagnosing trouble, a
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Looks great! These need fixing:

knowlege (spelling)
gas fired (hyphenate)
trouble, and (no comma)
action of (change of to for)
sterilizers. (comma,not period)
as inlet; vent pipes; valves; meters; gauges; hangers; brackets; and water, sewer, gas and air connections (change to: as: inlet, vent pipes, valves, meters, gauges, hanger

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