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Desk fold 690 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Urgent help please

Hi, I need some help with the style of this sentence:

I partnered with a client to acquire a company in the ZZ industry that had generated losses the previous two years.

Maybe someone can come up with something more 'stylish'.

  

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Maybe someone can come up with something more 'stylish'. I think that is quite stylish enough for your purpose. You should just shorten it: I partnered with a client to acquire a ZZ-industry company that had previously suffered losses.

— Mister Micawber

  • Maybe someone can come up with something more 'stylish'.
  • I think that is quite stylish enough for your purpose.
  • You should just shorten it: I partnered with a client to acquire a ZZ-industry company that had previously suffered losses.
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desk fold 690I partnered with a client to acquire a company in the ZZ industry that had generated losses the previous two years.Maybe someone can come up with something more 'stylish'.

I think that is quite stylish enough for your purpose. You should just shorten it:

I partnered with a client to acquire a ZZ-industry company that had previously suf

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