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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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URGENT HELP - PERSONAL STATEMENT
hi i need help
i'm applying for a university - social work and social science
this is the opening paragraph of my personal statement; i need help on what goes next?
“You just look sad,” my counselor told me during my sophomore interview. I remember sophomore year. I remember the lowest grades of my high school life, the days filled with fear and depression, and myself trying to hide desperately from everyone’s eyes, but after all I cherish my sophomore year more than any year of my life, because I found something I could be dissolved in and die for without regret. This has taught me to overcome obstacles, stand up again, and achieve the unachievable.
i'm applying for a university - social work and social science
this is the opening paragraph of my personal statement; i need help on what goes next?
“You just look sad,” my counselor told me during my sophomore interview. I remember sophomore year. I remember the lowest grades of my high school life, the days filled with fear and depression, and myself trying to hide desperately from everyone’s eyes, but after all I cherish my sophomore year more than any year of my life, because I found something I could be dissolved in and die for without regret. This has taught me to overcome obstacles, stand up again, and achieve the unachievable.
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