Urgent help needed! Motivation letter!

Hi! I would need quick help for my motivation letter, I am applying for an internship! Thanks already and I appreciate your help!!
Sarah

Dear Dr. Smith,

I am very interested in applying for an internship for the spring of 2009 in your department. I am a law student in the fifth semester at the . I am recommended by Rachel Kamsor, who has absolved an internship in your department last summer.

I would be glad to absolve an internship in the department of reproductive health and research (RHR) for three reasons.

Firstly, I am generally interested in human rights law and would be happy to specialize in this area in the future. The opportunity to absolve an internship in your organization would give a lot of new impressions and knowledge about human social problems and especially the human rights law at the international level.

Secondly, to participate in your department would give me a better comprehension of how a lawyer of human rights works and what the daily precise area of responsibility is. That would be a great insight in my desired job.

Thirdly, I am very interested in the main topic of the reproductive health and research department. I want to gain a better idea about the societal ills in our world and in connection therewith to what extent it is possible to help.

This opportunity to take part in your internship program would be very exciting and challenging for me and I would welcome the unique opportunity to work with you and to put my training, experience, creativity and enthusiasm into practice. I am very open minded to people, have got a quickly apprehension and I like the challenge. I would like to work as an intern, from approximately February 15 through March 30, 2009.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you for your
attention and consideration.



Sincerely