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Alc24 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Urgent Help needed A letter for a job, need help correcting it, I looked over it already
Could you please take a look at this for me and tell me what you think and if the grammar and structure is fine?
To whom this may concern,
I was contact by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator.
First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only assume that as a moderator you must be under a lot of pressure. I've had my fair share of pressure over the past fews years whether it was working in an office where I had to satisfy the clients demands or working at a fast food chain where client interaction during rush hour for instance was one of the main aspects of the job. Being able to maintain composure is something that I've learnt as a poker player and sure is something that is needed if I were to work as a moderator. To me a moderator has to be calm, has to be able to use common sense when conversing with a player, impartial; able to treat everyone fairly and lastly must be considerate. I'm someone who understands the job description of a moderator and know what qualities one must possess in order to carry out the task. I think I shall be up to the task. Speaking of moderation, as you know I excluded myself from playing this week. Isn't that what moderation is all about, knowing when to stop.
I hope this will convince you that I am the right person for the job and hope to hear from you soon.
Regards
thank you
To whom this may concern,
I was contact by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator.
First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only assume that as a moderator you must be under a lot of pressure. I've had my fair share of pressure over the past fews years whether it was working in an office where I had to satisfy the clients demands or working at a fast food chain where client interaction during rush hour for instance was one of the main aspects of the job. Being able to maintain composure is something that I've learnt as a poker player and sure is something that is needed if I were to work as a moderator. To me a moderator has to be calm, has to be able to use common sense when conversing with a player, impartial; able to treat everyone fairly and lastly must be considerate. I'm someone who understands the job description of a moderator and know what qualities one must possess in order to carry out the task. I think I shall be up to the task. Speaking of moderation, as you know I excluded myself from playing this week. Isn't that what moderation is all about, knowing when to stop.
I hope this will convince you that I am the right person for the job and hope to hear from you soon.
Regards
thank you
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Dear sir / madam To whom this may concern, I was contact(ed) by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator. First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only assume that as a moderator you must be under a lot of pressure.
- Dear sir / madam To whom this may concern, I was contact(ed) by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator.
- First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure.
- I can only assume that as a moderator you must be under a lot of pressure.
- I've had my fair share of pressure over the past fews years whether it was working in an office where I had to satisfy the clients demands or working at a fast food chain where client interaction during rush hour for instance was one of the main aspects of the job.
- Being able to maintain composure is something that I've learnt as a poker player and sure is something that is needed if I were to work as a moderator.
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Dear sir / madam To whom this may concern,
I was contact(ed) by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator.
First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only assume that as a moderator you must be under a lot of pressure. I'
I was contact(ed) by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator.
First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only assume that as a moderator you must be under a lot of pressure. I'
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To whom it this may concern:
I was contacted by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator.
First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only as
I was contacted by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator.
First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only as
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