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Jamalbajwa123 Posted 19 years ago
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(URGENT) Editing needed!! please help
0 yes sir, i made the corrections ...now will you please correct the underlined part ( i know it does not flow well) I would really appreciate your response. 02 br
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00 They were all staying in a house owned by an old woman. The narrator, Bonaparte, and his comrade, Noble become good friends with the two English prisoners. Jeremiah Donavan, the third Irish man, stays away from their company and seriously performs his duty 02 u 00 . 02 br
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01 u 00 For Bonaparte, this news was worse than a shock because by then he had developed affection with his English friends. The story reaches its climax when the English executes their Irish prisoners. In response, Donovan orders his comrades to prepare Hawkins and Belcher for execution. At that moment, many arguments take place between allegiances to once country or friendship. The falling action takes place with the execution of Hawkins and Belcher. In the end, Bonaparte and Noble consider this execution against their humanity and friendship. 02 u 0-
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00 They were all staying in a house owned by an old woman. The narrator, Bonaparte, and his comrade, Noble become good friends with the two English prisoners. Jeremiah Donavan, the third Irish man, stays away from their company and seriously performs his duty 02 u 00 . 02 br
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01 u 00 For Bonaparte, this news was worse than a shock because by then he had developed affection with his English friends. The story reaches its climax when the English executes their Irish prisoners. In response, Donovan orders his comrades to prepare Hawkins and Belcher for execution. At that moment, many arguments take place between allegiances to once country or friendship. The falling action takes place with the execution of Hawkins and Belcher. In the end, Bonaparte and Noble consider this execution against their humanity and friendship. 02 u 0-
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now will you please correct the underlined part ( I know it does not flow well) I would really appreciate your response. They were all staying in a house owned by an old woman. The narrator, Bonaparte, and his comrade, Noble , become good friends with the two English prisoners.
- now will you please correct the underlined part ( I know it does not flow well) I would really appreciate your response.
- They were all staying in a house owned by an old woman.
- The narrator, Bonaparte, and his comrade, Noble , become good friends with the two English prisoners.
- Jeremiah Do nav an, the third Irish man, stays away from their company and seriously rigorously performs his duty .
- For Bonaparte, this news was worse than a shock because by then he had developed affection with for his English friends.
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Jamalbajwa123
Yes sir, I have made the corrections ...now will you please correct the underlined part ( I know it does not flow well) I would really appreciate your response.
They were all staying in a house owned by an old woman. The narrator,
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hey, dont you think that alligence is the right word for saying that they argued about either to go with their friendship or with their orders...?
At that moment, many arguments take place between allegiances to once country or friendship
At that moment, many arguments take place between allegiances to once country or friendship
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