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Jenthecute Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

(URGENT!!) COULD YOU TAKE A LOOK AT MY SENTENCES??

0I'm writing about a TV broadcast services on the phone. Could you take a look at my sentences and correct them, please?02br
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00THANK YOU in advance! 05002br
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00When provided with low bitrate by the service provider, the quality of the broadcast can be poor. 02br
00To receive the best quality broadcast services, you need to be in a service area with adequate signal strength. 02br
00(This affects the recording quality of the broadcast.)02br
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00You can get a better view of TV by adjusting the LCD compartment degree/position.02br
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00* I want my sentences sound professional rather than friendly. (For examle, I am not sure if I can use the word 'poor' as in '...broadcast can be poor')010id1
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 01i 00I'm writing about a TV broadcast services on the phone. 02font 02br 02br 01font 00 For good reception, you need to be in a service area with adequate signal strength. 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02font 0-

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 01i 00I'm writing about a TV broadcast services on the phone.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00 For good reception, you need to be in a service area with adequate signal strength.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02font 0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font01i00I'm writing about a TV broadcast services on the phone. Could you take a look at my sentences and correct them, please?02i02font02br
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00Here are some suggestions.02br
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01font00A low bitrate from the service provider may cause p
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0thank you very much CLIVE!02br
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00have a good one! 050010id1
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0oh, by the way..02br
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00how did 'the quality of the broadcast' sound? is it not so professional?02br
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00and how about 'the best quality broadcast services' sound?02br
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00I want to know the nuance of the whole sentences, please.0-
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0 00When provided with low 01font00bitrate02font00 by the service provider, the quality of the broadcast can be poor00. 02br
00Did you mean to say "01font00bid rate02font00?" 0-
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0Hi,02br
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00The original poster's sentence was this: When provided with 01u00low bitrate02u00 by the service provider, the quality of the broadcast can be poor.02br
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00Your correction was this: 01u00A low bitrate02u00 from the service provider may cause poor reception.02br
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01cite10Goodman12cite10When provided with low 11font10bitrate12font10 by the service provider, the quality of the broadcast can be poor10. 12br
10Did you mean to say "11font10bid rate12font10?"12blockquote
10From
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01cite10Jenthecute12cite10When provided with low bitrate by the service provider, the quality of the broadcast can be poor. 12blockquote
10I feel this sentence is 01i00dangled. 02i00One might take01i00 02i00this sentence as saying "When the quality of the broadcast is pro
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