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Jenthecute Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

(URGENT!!) comma & such as

0Ex 1) Wild flowers, such as orchids and primroses are become rare. 02br
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00Should I leave the comma in front 'such as'??? it's urgent!! lease, HELP!!0-
  

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0 You posted this twice, Jen. 0-
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0 wanted to delete one of them, but i coudln't! sorry!!! 0-
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0I think I would recommend a slight revision in the sentence before punctuation beomes an issue: "01i00Certain02i00 wildflowers such as orchids and primroses 01i00have02i00 become rare." 02br
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00If, indeed, the intent is to say that wildflowers, in general, have become rare, and you want to pause and highlight two specific e
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0Dear Jenthecute,02br
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00«Wild flowers, such as orchids and primroses, are becoming rare.» It is my opinion that this means that all wild flowers are becoming rare. Orchids and primroses are examples of wild flowers.02br
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00«Wild flowers such as orchids and primroses are becoming rare.» It is my opinion that this means that some wild flowers are be
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0Yes, Goldmund, I believe we have said essentially the same thing. 02br
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00'Are becoming rare' and 'have become rare' are equally grammatically correct, but do not mean the same thing. It is, however, not possible to know from the submitted sentence which-01del00if either02del00 meaning is truer to the facts.0-
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0If in doubt leave it out. 05002br
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0<<Davkett"] 02br
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00I think I would recommend a slight revision in the sentence before punctuation beomes an issue: "01i00Certain02i00 wildflowers such as orchids and primroses 01i00have02i00 become rare." 02br
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00If, indeed, the intent is to say that wildflowers, in general, have become rare,
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01cite10Milky12cite10the posters sentence is correct as it stands.12br
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10Two versions were posted, milky. Which one are you saying is correct?02br
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00Both versions are incorrect in the phrase 'are become'.02br
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00The first version requi
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01. Wild flowers, such as orchids and primroses are become rare.02br
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002. Wild flowers such as orchids and primroses are become rare.02br
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00I'm not sure we can say that the first sentence is correct, as it requires either a second comma or no comma at all.02br
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00The second sentence is correct if we allow the archaic use o
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0Thank you MrP for the reminder of the archaic use of 'are become'. I must admit that that form did resonate way in the back of my brain on first hearing.02br
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00Would you like to toss your hat in the ring as to any difference in meaning that might be implied by punctuating the sentence with commas and not?0-

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