URGENT! - can someone please review my statement of interest, its due tomorrow. PLEASE!

I am already enrolled in the univeristy, i am writing this SOI for some bursaries that asked for this.

My decision to pursue graduate studies in XXXCountry and to be part of the graduate program at XXXUniversity University is underscored by my firm belief that success comes with passion, dedication and patience. I had applied for the Master of Engineering Entrepreneurship and Innovation to explore the best practices of business development more deeply and also because of the flexibility offered by this prestigious university and in particular the XXXX School of Engineering Practice.

Since enrolling in XXXUniversity University, I have learned a lot from vibrant research activities which include world class entrepreneurship and innovation projects which fascinate young minds who have the will to combine theoretical study with intense practical research work. As one of those young minds who has chosen a technically challenging career field, and as one who enjoys the excitement of setting a goal and achieving it by new scientific techniques and human-centered approaches, I would like to thrive further and learn more in my chosen field of study.

For as long as I remember, “passionate” was exactly how I felt when it came to understanding computers and technology. I remember being mesmerized the first time I used my father’s computer as a child; I found it fascinating to explore and would investigate its capabilities whenever given the opportunity. My passion for understanding computers motivated me to seek further knowledge and pursue my studies in the area of computer science at XXXX University, a renowned university in India. I successfully completed my Bachelor's in Computer Science as one of the top graduate students in the university.

In addition to my enjoyment of the technical fieldwork and because I felt practical subjects were equally as important as theoretical ones. As a result, I have been consistently able to quickly apply my skills to practical fields. For instance, I worked as IT Officer and later as an IT Manager with international NGOs including XXXX and XXXX. I worked as a research analyst in XXXX, a branch of Gallup International Research Company and my passion for business enabled me to establish my start-up company that involved small IT projects with XXXX and XXXX.

I am currently pursuing a project as the founder of a grocery mobile application with artificial intelligence that can help grocery shoppers save time and money by providing them personalized offers. Moreover, this grocery mobile application will enable grocery stores to better understand their consumers and to plan its marketing and inventory based on the needs of consumers. This project will help end users to save thousands of dollars annually on grocery shopping in addition to saving hundreds of valuable hours and enable grocery stores to increase their revenue and sales up to 11% ($X.X a year) in XXXCountry.

I have come to realize my passion for learning continues to grow and my many years of experience in the professional field have led me to recognize the desire to undertake further research in technology innovation. It would be my greatest dream to earn my master’s degree from a prestigious institution like XXXUniversity University. A career in research where I can continue to explore and analyze the possibilities in technology innovation would allow me to make positive contributions to the continuous technological advances in society by bringing solutions to problems. Subsequently, I believe that my passion, dedication, patience, work experience and educational background will add to XXXUniversity University's robust diversity.

Sincerely,
XXXX